Hullo. Please could you remove the visual attachment from your poem in order for it to be eligible for the contest.
Aahh how has this poem gotten no comments yet? Well as the first to comment, I'd like to tell you that this is definitely one of my favorites!! So visual, so metaphorical, so perfect a description of those who are trapped within their own, immobile bodies. I wish you luck in the contest, and I hope to see this one among the winners!